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品译:Save The Best For Last
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品译:珍惜最好到最后" m2 x; ?: p. p2 x n0 K
0 L& s6 r+ A2 V! I r优美的谱曲,简炼的作词,个中故事虽终不是悲剧,但词曲都透着一种被雪藏太久,冰冻三尺之伤.不是所有珍爱的事物都可用雪藏的方式来维系,比如爱情.不难看出,作者及故事中的主角定是一秀外惠中之人.Save The Best For Last---非常精深的一句话,本人反复琢磨,本想按通篇的基调译名为"雪藏最好到最后",但最后那句用的过去时态却深深牵动着我的心,我觉得那才是作者真正的点睛之笔.
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/ y6 ^% R% J! z0 I0 k" Q真爱如同所有美丽鲜活的生灵一样,贪恋阳光雨露,也能直面风霜,只是不需要雪藏,因为她不是没有生命的物件.人生苦短,感情之事若是雪藏太久也会非死即伤,所以我们应该尽早学会珍惜而不是简单的珍藏.因此,本人最后还是译名为"珍惜最好到最后",这或许正是作者对所有读者及听众的美好祝愿与期望.& y( ^ A; ?1 j3 G2 i! J+ }
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翻译是一门,需要善于将理性与感性有机融合的,需要富有创造、想象、推理与表达力的,解语艺术.译曲词,需要充分理解引伸为数不多的上下文;译经典,更需要仔细推敲创新出精品.一曲经典老歌,一阙精深简词,到了译者的笔下,不仅需要专业技巧,更需要用心体会,一篇译作如能同时留有指间的温度,方能重建一层通天之塔---I wish I do.) z+ o( t: Z( _
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Save The Best For Last 珍惜最好到最后" _, N$ N9 @4 e* x4 Q
原唱:Vanessa Williams
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Sometimes the sun goes 'round the moon 有时艳阳 也会追月
9 B1 k+ o) [9 L* c1 i0 r- YI see the passion in your eyes 有时在你眸中 也见炽热
* z; \* e( Q; r- |; ]$ F$ uSometimes it's all a big surprise 人生的惊喜 便莫过于此3 ?: {9 w; k0 F$ z: I
Cause there was a time when all I did was wish 可我所做一切 只是一个梦想/ Z* z: A9 ]6 A' C6 f# l! n! {
You'd tell me this was love 你却告诉我 这就是爱
, U$ t* |- K; l R9 }/ N1 t) r& R2 cIt's not the way I hoped or how I planned 虽已偏离 我原本的期翼之道
+ E5 G8 w0 h8 a4 S( s" R; CBut somehow it's enough 却也莫名 已觉足够4 h* j' ~5 B" o: ]+ l
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And now we're standing face to face 此时此刻 我们咫尺相顾
9 }. h- i G0 v9 r( SIsn't this world a crazy place 这个世界 岂不癫狂无语" n3 p4 N9 p5 L& t: r- N
Just when I thought our chance had passed 恰似缘分已尽 万念俱灰之时: n6 u+ w9 B( C
You go and save the best for last 你却不期而至 将真爱雪藏到最后一刻
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All of the nights you came to me 那些曾经的 相伴之夜9 i8 l& E. [+ N* m+ K6 [
When some silly girl had set you free 不过是你游戏花丛的 间歇之时 O8 D4 c) ]" |/ R5 @
You wondered how you'd make it through 当你纠结着 如何在群芳中潇洒自如
) |4 g# M9 V& o% i6 J3 K3 }. Y0 e3 LI wondered what was wrong with you 我却苦思着 你的劣根生于何处6 L; `" [$ W* E
Cause how could you give your love to someone else 可你怎能 在移情别恋之时7 u" k2 W" Y/ J& L# E7 b# F% u( y5 k
And share your dreams with me 却又哄我 与你同梦相惜
( i% T9 H$ j `& M' d6 USometimes the very thing you're looking for 有时你 众里寻她千百度
$ w) D A) _1 B- _ l# `Is the one thing you can't see 却盲目 不见灯火阑珊处4 p* O* d) [ A" ?; n
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And now we're standing face to face 此时此刻 我们咫尺相顾% h3 t% Y; Q- Q/ I" F
Isn't this world a crazy place 这个世界 岂不癫狂无语9 O+ m f# ^7 @
Just when I thought our chance had passed 恰似缘分已尽 万念俱灰之时. y" [, E9 h, |, [3 y
You go and save the best for last 你却不期而至 将真爱雪藏到最后一刻
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Sometimes the very thing you're looking for 有时你 众里寻她千百度- I w ^/ S' F0 E" g& q
Is the one thing you can't see 却盲目 不见灯火阑珊处
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* L, Y4 Z' N% r, z" o4 k9 L, |% E% ]Sometimes the snow comes down in June 有时六月 也有飞雪
2 {* n' ~3 O* a( aSometimes the sun goes 'round the moon 有时艳阳 也会追月
9 |( U p$ ?6 Q5 s4 x* }Just when I thought our chance had passed 恰似缘分已尽 万念俱灰之时. I4 Z' [& ~% E0 L0 `. b
You go and save the best for last 你却不期而至 雪藏最好到最后
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You went and saved the best for last 你的不期而至 终于珍惜最好到最后 |
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